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September 23, 2009


A decade and more of waiting for the dawn’s bleak light
Cuddling, embracing, comforting herself
Humming, sighing, tears under the eyes
Enduring the coldness and darkness of the night.

Numb by the pain, heart is freezing
Tired with beating, then suddenly it ached
Enveloped with fear, it turned almost dead
Trying to recoup but damage is there.

Still giving love, patience and hope
Trying to see a sense in everything gone
Trying to look forward, gasping, clasping, holding
And hoping the rope is strong enough to hang on.

One given chance it’s all there is
One more try to stop emptiness
Unconditional love is still there to give
Please don’t make a mistake for she has death.

There will be no more after this last hope
If all fails, then darkness shall come
She will be gone, never return, nothing shall be left
So please be careful, never miss, fail nor neglect.


9 Comments leave one →
  1. cheryl permalink
    September 30, 2009 12:37 am

    is there really a chance?or is there another problem?gotcha!

  2. manhid permalink
    September 25, 2009 9:10 pm

    chi sana talagang may chance pa at di sya tuluyang mawala may tao kasi na pag nagmamahal hindi pinapakita sana magtiwala sya at gagawin nya ang lahat wag lang mawala ang minamahal nya.

    • mabulaklaknadila permalink
      September 27, 2009 7:07 pm

      oi manhid last chance nga e. LOL! me chance tlaga. kaya lang, careful careful. hehehe.

  3. September 25, 2009 9:42 am

    Tissue po! Huhuhu….

    ~sniff~ ~sniff~

    • September 25, 2009 7:34 pm

      at bakit? touch ka? uuuyyyy…. o ayan! ~ ibinato ang isang rolyo ng toilet roll ~ LOL!

      • September 26, 2009 11:45 am

        Aray naman! Baket toilet roll?

        Diaper wipes na lang! Hahahhaha.

        • mabulaklaknadila permalink
          September 27, 2009 7:09 pm

          ~@binato ng gamit na diaper~ LOL! o yan request mo yan ha! hahaha.

  4. September 24, 2009 3:16 pm

    ang ganda ng poem. napaka-deep. true, cherish the person you love while she/he’s with you. there will be no regrets when she/he leaves you. 😀

    • September 24, 2009 6:29 pm

      indeed kafatid! dapat lang na di natin i take for granted ang mga taong nagmamahal sa tin diva? medyo emotional nga ata yang poem na yan a! hahaha. di ko pansin. wahehehe.

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